The following is an outline for an argumentative essay in a graduate-level information science writing course. Please provide feedback on this outline regarding how arguable (not trivial) the thesis statement is; how well the argument is supported; and how well the outline responds to opposing views. Your task is to help me improve this outline.

Because I am sending you text, please disregard any references to visual support or visual information. Focus your feedback on issues that will lead to a better argumentative essay since that is the final product I will be producing.

Feel free to also make suggestions on grammar, vocabulary, and language usage as well. Finally, suggest 5 additional questions I could ask you for additional feedback on my essay and outline.

This is my outline: